The first scene is based we identify the two main characters the victim (Amy) and the murder ( wayne), we see the that Amy is being bullied by two boys and Wayne enters the scene defending her and this gradully bulids upto scene 2 which is based on Wayne and his wife and how she deals with consequences, if she does not do what he tells her. Furthermore, this builds up and shows the type of person his. Scene 3 is the most detailed scence because it focuses on the main storlyline the murder, however the script does not mention the murder,meaning that the audience have to work out what has happened. This is scene is gruesome and the main plot.
Scene 4 is the shortest scene were it just focuses and the bracelet and the victim board and and how Wayne does not have any kind of remorse.
I have completed this as my first draft, for the script.


